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    A few poems :)


    Most of these would've been from this past spring, but I'll fish around for others ^_^
    I'd love any critiquing or comments on them !

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    I'm speechless.

    My brain, is too much in awe.

    These are great man, you wrote all these? I love them so much. I wish I was half as good as you.

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    @pasture
    Thank you ! That means a lot !
    I did write them, yes . The third one was influenced slightly by cumming's Buffalo Bill's Defunct, and the last one was done in the style of Shelley's To Night ^_^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reese View Post
    @pasture
    Thank you ! That means a lot !
    I did write them, yes . The third one was influenced slightly by cumming's Buffalo Bill's Defunct, and the last one was done in the style of Shelley's To Night ^_^
    So awesome, so awesome!

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    @Reese
    These were just awesome man.
    I'm even not that big of a fan of poetry, so my opinion probably doesn't count for much.
    But I thoroughly enjoyed these.
    MOAR!

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    Here's a few more ! These are actually a bit earlier than the others, but they would have been before last summer.


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    @Reese You don't just write poetry - you paint poetry. Love the use of spacing.
    You have quite the arsenal of vocabulary words as well. Fantastic job!

    Out of curiosity, do you draw?

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    @Daenerys
    Thank you !
    I'm afraid that I can't draw, though --I've attempted a few times but I simply don't have a knack for it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reese View Post
    @Daenerys
    Thank you !
    I'm afraid that I can't draw, though --I've attempted a few times but I simply don't have a knack for it
    Ahh okay *__*

    Just read the narrative poem in your second set and cackled when I read up to the last line. Describing the cliques of the lunchroom as if they were something akin to what you'd find in some vagabond war camp - LOL. I've been reading a lot of really bloody chapters about warring factions in ASOIAF lately so I found the comparison especially amusing.

    Seriously, these are brilliant. I hope you continue updating this thread whenever you have the time.

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    nice job, I very like the music note

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