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    +rep for someone who can look over my resume and give me feedback

    see title

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    Resume about what?
    Maybe I can help xd


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    English Major here. Willing to help.
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    Ill be glad to help you out

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    More people than I expected so fast, so I'll post it here for now

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    Last edited by Miguel; 01-11-2012 at 08:00 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ./m View Post
    More people than I expected so fast, so I'll post it here for now

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    Couple of things:

    1.) I don't think it's normal to put what kind of job you are seeking on your actual resume. It looks fine in this case, but that isn't something I've ever done before.

    2.) I think you could go into a bit more detail generally. Is there any prior eduction that you've had, at all, which you could add on there?

    3.) Some of the language is a little jargon-y, and may be alien to some people. The person reading your resume may not necessarily be an expert in the field where you are applying to work.


    Apart from that, it looks fine to me. I might be able to tidy up the words you use, but other than that, it's a decent resume.
    Last edited by Miguel; 01-11-2012 at 08:00 PM.
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    Just a tip, not that you did this at all, but keep your resume to one page. Employers hate when people give them multiple pages for resumes.

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