+Rep for editing a Grade 10 English Essay

[Maki]

On Catcher In The Rye :) I dont think you have to have read it to help me, as I'm not really looking for help on content

+FULLrep just to smooth over some transitions and rephrase things as IMO it's a little wordy
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I promise it won't be too difficult, I'm a pretty good English student so you won't have to rewrite it entirely
Please PM and I'll send over the essay
I'd really like some constructive help :3 Mimi rachel if you were still up for it, let me know ~

[I_royalty_I]

How long is it? I'm very good at bullshitting essays and making them sound nice.
But I'm pretty tired and would zone out on a 10 page paper haha

[Maki]

How long is it? I'm very good at bullshitting essays and making them sound nice.
But I'm pretty tired and would zone out on a 10 page paper haha

Basically 3 pages :P

[Mod]

Can try, unless you'd like the femme touch on your papers.

[Raj]

i gotchuuu once i get home

[Andymac106]

I'm in 10th grade but I haven't read that yet :/

[Dan]

Ok I private messaged you.

[Maki]

Thanks guys, PMed you all!
Andymac106 I dunno, might just be part of the Canadian curriculum �\_(ツ)_/�

[Andymac106]

I guess. What level of English are you in? In America (or at least the part where I am) there's CP, accelerated and AP. And all the books their reading are different :P

[Maki]

I guess. What level of English are you in? In America (or at least the part where I am) there's CP, accelerated and AP. And all the books their reading are different :P

Oh hmm, never heard of CP/Accelerated, but I think that's the equivalent of Applied/Academic (respectively). ^^ What part of America are you in? :)

For us it's in this order of difficulty: Locally Developed -> Applied -> Academic -> Pre-AP (until grade 11 and 12, which are actual AP courses, nonetheless Pre-AP doesn't differ too much from Academic save for the extra workload and content from the grade above).
For Academic (my level), we studied Othello and Catcher in the Rye ~

[Andymac106]

Yeah I think those match up :) and I'm in the southeast, Georgia to be precise!

See, I'm in AP (or well it's the same as yours, Pre-AP, just preparing you for the AP classes in 11th and 12th grade) it's going along the 11th grade gifted (in your case academic I think) curriculum so we kinda skipped over the 10th grade reading books :P We've read The Scarlet Letter and we're about to start The Great Gatsby soon :D

[rachel]

Mint oops i'm a little too late, LOL
but i wouldn't mind also taking a look at it once some other people do, bby! :$
just let me knooo[Only registered and activated users can see links] <3

[Poem]

i'm down if you still need this

g'luck!

[Naomi]

sowwy i was too late to the party Mint!!

Next time just pm me it on skype and I will definitely edit for you. <3