Another original song by me

[Jolz]

Still no singing (because I still can't sing) but the guitar is more interesting to listen to in this one


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Enjoy

[Soul]

Jolz This. Is. Freaking. Awesome.

The pictures were a nice touch. xD

I'd totally sing for you. ;~;

[Jolz]

Jolz This. Is. Freaking. Awesome.

The pictures were a nice touch. xD

I'd totally sing for you. ;~;

Thanks bro :)

Download it from youtube dude and get some singing over it. Seriously I would be so happy if you did :)

[Soul]

Thanks bro :)

Download it from youtube dude and get some singing over it. Seriously I would be so happy if you did :)

Ooh, that would definitely give me something to do! You don't have lyrics?

[Thunder]

I actually fucking love that bass line. Sounds like rage against the machine :P Also, the main chorus/riff is very sick, and sorta satriani-ish in a way... I dunno, reminds me of a song of his. Very nice! Also, I don't know what lyrics could do to help this song, some things should be just instrumental. That's just my opinion, I'm a big fan of buckethead, joe satriani, john 5, rustey cooley, etc etc.

[Mod]

Another A+ beat.

Tbh, I didn't watch the vid the first time through. I just hit the play and did something else.

The beat made me think of zipping around a twisty coastal highway in a roadster at sunset, looking out at a pink sky against the reflective ocean's waves, as the orange sun falls along the horizon on a summer evening. No lie.

Then I read Soul's comment, went back to the vid and it destroyed that imagery.

[Arsura]

The beat made me think of zipping around a twisty coastal highway in a roadster at sunset, looking out at a pink sky against the reflective ocean's waves, as the orange sun falls along the horizon on a summer evening. No lie.


You're so poetic.

[Soul]

Another A+ beat.

Tbh, I didn't watch the vid the first time through. I just hit the play and did something else.

The beat made me think of zipping around a twisty coastal highway in a roadster at sunset, looking out at a pink sky against the reflective ocean's waves, as the orange sun falls along the horizon on a summer evening. No lie.

Then I read Soul's comment, went back to the vid and it destroyed that imagery.

You hurt me

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You hurt me

Mod But I agree, the pictures do not match that imagery. xD

[Jolz]

Ooh, that would definitely give me something to do! You don't have lyrics?

not for this one

I can write some though if you want

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I actually fucking love that bass line. Sounds like rage against the machine :P Also, the main chorus/riff is very sick, and sorta satriani-ish in a way... I dunno, reminds me of a song of his. Very nice! Also, I don't know what lyrics could do to help this song, some things should be just instrumental. That's just my opinion, I'm a big fan of buckethead, joe satriani, john 5, rustey cooley, etc etc.

John 5 is fucking awesome!

Good taste sir, good taste

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Another A+ beat.

Tbh, I didn't watch the vid the first time through. I just hit the play and did something else.

The beat made me think of zipping around a twisty coastal highway in a roadster at sunset, looking out at a pink sky against the reflective ocean's waves, as the orange sun falls along the horizon on a summer evening. No lie.

Then I read Soul's comment, went back to the vid and it destroyed that imagery.

... ok that's going in the lyrics! haha

[Mod]

You're so poetic.

Gotta have my moments when I'm not talking about shitting behind a 7-11, amirite?

[Soul]

Jolz

Haha, if you want. Either way. It's your song so I figured you have the right to write your own lyrics.

[Thunder]

Jolz I'll listen to some Black Widow of La Porte just for ya :D

[Jolz]

Jolz I'll listen to some Black Widow of La Porte just for ya :D

I'm also a big fan Zakk Wylde... in case no one noticed

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Jolz

Haha, if you want. Either way. It's your song so I figured you have the right to write your own lyrics.



You give it a shot, I'd love to hear what you can come up with :)

[Soul]

I'm also a big fan Zakk Wylde... in case no one noticed

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You give it a shot, I'd love to hear what you can come up with :)

I'll try! It'll be leisurely for now, but who knows how I'll do, hahaha. Any bands/artists you'd want me to kind of want em to "copy" the style?

And any theme of the song?

[Jolz]

I'll try! It'll be leisurely for now, but who knows how I'll do, hahaha. Any bands/artists you'd want me to kind of want em to "copy" the style?

And any theme of the song?

Anything that you would like.

I didn't have anything in mind when writing it so it's open really

[metaldroga]

Great soundtrack, just need lyrics :$

[Jolz]

Great soundtrack, just need lyrics :$


Soul is taking care of that :)

[metaldroga]

So is gonna be perfect then :P

[Arsura]

Gotta have my moments when I'm not talking about shitting behind a 7-11, amirite?

Can't argue that point.

[|2eap]

Just as good as the last one! keep it up! album title "soundtrack to my life"? anyone?
great shit!

[Duck4Cover]

Pretty sweet song Jolz.
Cant wait to see what Soul does with the lyrics.

[Ice]

That was awesome :D

Watched it for the pics, liked it for the music )b

[Jolz]

That was awesome :D

Watched it for the pics, liked it for the music )b

Cheers bro :)

[katix]

o_o Wow that was really awesome. I wish I could make something like that.

[Jolz]

o_o Wow that was really awesome. I wish I could make something like that.

Thank you :)

Do you play guitar?

[katix]

Thank you :)

Do you play guitar?

:P My boyfriend is starting to teach me, I suck so it's gunna be a while until I can actually say I play. XD But man, I thought my boyfriend was good at it but your song was just amazing. :o_o:

[Jolz]

:P My boyfriend is starting to teach me, I suck so it's gunna be a while until I can actually say I play. XD But man, I thought my boyfriend was good at it but your song was just amazing. :o_o:

awww thanks :)

I'm actually currently writing a starters guide for reading tabs for CK

[katix]

awww thanks :)

I'm actually currently writing a starters guide for reading tabs for CK

Shoot get that done! xD I would seriously be grateful for a starters guide!

[Elmo]

I envy your talent! Sounds so much like Rage against the machine.

[Jolz]

I envy your talent! Sounds so much like Rage against the machine.

Cheers bro

[utahclock]

you are talented !

[HenriP]

Beautiful!