annamia
03-10-2013, 03:18 AM
Hi
I need help with my english presentation about the daily life of the Indians today.
I need the language and grammar corrected. As I'm german (and speak to a german class) the english shouldn't be that "difficult".
Maybe somebody could as well check the content. Will +rep for every helpful answer ;)
thanks
INDIANS TODAY
Today�s Living Conditions
Employment and Housing
The Living Conditions of the Native Americans, especially in their reservations, are extremely bad. Some people even call it �comparable to the Third World�. They have many issues of economics, health, housing and education.
Many households are overcrowded and many people are earning below poverty wages or are even unemployed. That is a reason why about 90,000 Indians are underhoused or homeless.
Often they don�t have utilities like running water or electricity.
All these issues (overcrowding, substandard housing and the lacking of utilities) increase the potential of health risk.
Health
The Indian Health Service doesn�t get enough financial support so they can�t cover the needed acute and preventative health care on the reservations. That�s why they suffer diseases as diabetes, heart disease, tuberculosis and cancer.
Education
They are often less educated because of their financial situation and because of the missing of schools in their reservations. Therefore they often have problems finding good jobs.
Drugs and alcohol abusing
They have many problems with drugs and alcohol because the Indians try to overcome their problems by drinking or taking drugs. To help them, lots of organizations were founded.
Their laws
The Europeans took all their laws and �put� them in reservations. The Indians had to live like the Europeans wanted them to be.
1924 the first got their own citizenship. The government didn�t interfere that much with the Native Americans anymore but they also didn�t helped and supported them anymore.
For this reason lots of the Indians moved to American cities and the reservations became poor.
They still don�t have enough rights and support to have the same possibilities as the other Americans. They are still often suppressed and not accepted.
-- It�s a circuit of problems the Indians have. The reason is in the history of the Native Americans. The only way to change it and to help them is to sensitize the people and to change their way of thinking.
The Native American Aid
The Native American Aid (NAA) is an organization providing programs which benefit the Indians. They serve many Indian people suffering from hunger, isolation and poverty. Their major efforts are the �Emergency Care�, the �Elder Care� and the �Nutrition Care�
I need help with my english presentation about the daily life of the Indians today.
I need the language and grammar corrected. As I'm german (and speak to a german class) the english shouldn't be that "difficult".
Maybe somebody could as well check the content. Will +rep for every helpful answer ;)
thanks
INDIANS TODAY
Today�s Living Conditions
Employment and Housing
The Living Conditions of the Native Americans, especially in their reservations, are extremely bad. Some people even call it �comparable to the Third World�. They have many issues of economics, health, housing and education.
Many households are overcrowded and many people are earning below poverty wages or are even unemployed. That is a reason why about 90,000 Indians are underhoused or homeless.
Often they don�t have utilities like running water or electricity.
All these issues (overcrowding, substandard housing and the lacking of utilities) increase the potential of health risk.
Health
The Indian Health Service doesn�t get enough financial support so they can�t cover the needed acute and preventative health care on the reservations. That�s why they suffer diseases as diabetes, heart disease, tuberculosis and cancer.
Education
They are often less educated because of their financial situation and because of the missing of schools in their reservations. Therefore they often have problems finding good jobs.
Drugs and alcohol abusing
They have many problems with drugs and alcohol because the Indians try to overcome their problems by drinking or taking drugs. To help them, lots of organizations were founded.
Their laws
The Europeans took all their laws and �put� them in reservations. The Indians had to live like the Europeans wanted them to be.
1924 the first got their own citizenship. The government didn�t interfere that much with the Native Americans anymore but they also didn�t helped and supported them anymore.
For this reason lots of the Indians moved to American cities and the reservations became poor.
They still don�t have enough rights and support to have the same possibilities as the other Americans. They are still often suppressed and not accepted.
-- It�s a circuit of problems the Indians have. The reason is in the history of the Native Americans. The only way to change it and to help them is to sensitize the people and to change their way of thinking.
The Native American Aid
The Native American Aid (NAA) is an organization providing programs which benefit the Indians. They serve many Indian people suffering from hunger, isolation and poverty. Their major efforts are the �Emergency Care�, the �Elder Care� and the �Nutrition Care�