annamia
12-12-2012, 07:51 AM
Hi.
As I'm not a native speaker I'm not sure about my sentences. I got them corrected by an friend who's english is quite good but I'm not always sure if they're correct now... so it would be nice if you could check them.
Will +rep for any helpful answer. Thanks.
Sitting in front of an old chimney... -OR- Sitting in front of an open fire...
He was the only guest of this caf�... -OR- He was the only guest in the (or this?) caf�...
What makes such a charming woman go outside alone at this hallow night. -OR- Why is a charming woman out on her own on such a holy (hallow?) night.
I can't see anything hallow about this night. -OR- I can't see anything holy about this night.
There is no need to be upset. -OR- There is no need to be sad.
...she said and sallied out of the caf�. -OR- ...she said and stumped out of the caf�.
As I'm not a native speaker I'm not sure about my sentences. I got them corrected by an friend who's english is quite good but I'm not always sure if they're correct now... so it would be nice if you could check them.
Will +rep for any helpful answer. Thanks.
Sitting in front of an old chimney... -OR- Sitting in front of an open fire...
He was the only guest of this caf�... -OR- He was the only guest in the (or this?) caf�...
What makes such a charming woman go outside alone at this hallow night. -OR- Why is a charming woman out on her own on such a holy (hallow?) night.
I can't see anything hallow about this night. -OR- I can't see anything holy about this night.
There is no need to be upset. -OR- There is no need to be sad.
...she said and sallied out of the caf�. -OR- ...she said and stumped out of the caf�.