50 Shades Of A Grey Paint Brush Analysis?

[Eventide Xweetok]

What did you think? Was it wrong? Is it even normal to write stories like that? Did you like it? What were your thoughts?

[Banannie]

It felt more like a 90's Linda Blair novel. 2 stars.

[Eventide Xweetok]

You know it deserved more than 2 stars. Did I go too far?

[Banannie]

You did. I feel as though it was a little too smutty, with stories like that you almost wanna 'hint' at the imagery rather than just throw it out there. The name is pretty clever though.

I still give it two stars, it's a better love story than Twilight.

[Eventide Xweetok]

You did. I feel as though it was a little too smutty, with stories like that you almost wanna 'hint' at the imagery rather than just throw it out there. The name is pretty clever though.

I still give it two stars, it's a better love story than Twilight.

Yes totally. Human - Xweetok love is way better than vampires falling in love. But was my story borderline beastiality? I mean I WAS a Xweetok in that story.

[Jay]

[Eventide Xweetok]

Looks like I already gifted it to 80s Linda Blair in my story. Lawl.