I can add a few helpful comments since writing has so much to do with my work and career
When your labeling works, you should consider either using quotations or italicizing it. Underlining works well too
Also make sure your last sentence has a clear thesis. 2-3 points and don't try to make the reasons too complicated
you will be doing that in the body. Just like your 2-3 points at the end of the first paragraph. It might be tempting
to make it sophisticated. You want to be clear on what your trying to say! Think of writing in your "own" words, just formally.