Super cute.
The only thing I would say is perhaps the program you use needs a upgrade, looks like you use MSPaint? Idk, I don't like how the lines look on anything done in paint, they're very rigid and gritty. Maybe try another programme?
Ability wise though, you're awesome!
i would eventually buy from you ;u;
for critiques, first thing i noticed was lineart coloring. some artists leave the outer lineart a darker color and make the inside match the coloring. some match the coloring all around. some just make it all one color. your lineart coloring seems to be sporadic and a bit sloppy. you can see lots of flakes of black in your colored lineart, and why is there black lineart if some of it is colored? also the lineart itself is pretty rigid and gritty like said above. you say it's "faster and easier," but faster and easier isn't what makes art better! your art is already adorable, and this is just my opinion, but if you either go back and touch up your solid lines (which will take time, yes, but it will look a lot better!) or consider using a brush tool instead, you'll see a difference.
i can't judge based on just one picture, but brush up on anatomy! even chibi-like artists like you and me need to know what things look like realistically so that our art looks better overall. when i draw my neopets quad, i use references of animals that they look like even when i'm drawing them as cute little balls of fur like this picture. too many anatomy pictures never hurt.
your coloring style is superb. i love it. i adore it. absolutely no issues there. like seriously. it's fantastic.
so is your style overall. it's adorable. it's a yes from me.
thank you so much for the honest critique! i'll learn from it! yeah i do agree with the sloppy colouring the line art, could've been better haha! and yeah i was trying to go for a more dynamic pose but i need to learn more about anatomy xD thanks so much!! by the way, how much do you think i should charge for something like that? i did this one in about 1.5 hours but i think with the brush tool i might take up to 2.
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for that one style specifically i'd charge around $10-15 personally, but others might have different opinions.
remember to never undersell yourself. don't sell your art for less than you think it's worth, even if one or two people say "it's too expensive!" because you'll find customers who WILL buy it for that and more. it's your time and love going into that piece.
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