Making myself vulnerable...

[Luck]

OHHHHHHH gotcha, I always have it set off my mistake

[Luck]

For all of you who enjoyed the first, I posted a second today, I wont bump this anymore just wanted to share

[Reemer]

I only watched the first episode, but I've got a few suggestions. I've been watching a lot of chuggaaconroy's videos, which you may or may not like.
First, tell us about the pokemon that you find, not just "This is a Hoothoot" but rather "Here we ran into a Hoothoot, he's a dark/flying pokemon(or whatever it is), though I'm not going to catch it because they aren't good in the first part of the game." Something like that, make it more personal. Like I'm in the same room as you, watching you play.
Second, if you make an error, make fun of yourself for it! You made a typo at the beginning, instead of saying "Oops, I made a mistake." I would say "Oh yeah, that's what my name is, Jfosh."

I've never made any LPs though, so the only ones I've watched are chugga a ProtonJon (along with some TheRunawayGuys, but those two are in it)
Hopefully I've made some constructive criticism for you. I don't want you to feel bad or anything lol.

Edit: Also, I don't mean to gravedig, I've been meaning to watch this for a while though. Definitely add the music from the game in as a background sound, it adds to the ambiance greatly.