I got bored towards the end so left the text rather bare and boring.
Love the colours in this.
I don't normally do c4d/anime stuff but i had the time so decided to give it a go.
It seems a it lacking looking back at it.
I really like the color scheme and the effects you used on your render!
However, I feel like you should add something on the right of the picture, since it looks a little empty to me.
Maybe a quote or something? Or like you said, the text could also made a little clearer/bigger!
However, nice work!