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    +Rep for editing a Grade 10 English Essay

    On Catcher In The Rye I dont think you have to have read it to help me, as I'm not really looking for help on content

    +FULLrep just to smooth over some transitions and rephrase things as IMO it's a little wordy
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    I promise it won't be too difficult, I'm a pretty good English student so you won't have to rewrite it entirely
    Please PM and I'll send over the essay
    I'd really like some constructive help :3 @(you need an account to see links) @(you need an account to see links) if you were still up for it, let me know ~
    Last edited by Maki; 01-12-2014 at 01:23 PM.

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    How long is it? I'm very good at bullshitting essays and making them sound nice.
    But I'm pretty tired and would zone out on a 10 page paper haha
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    Quote Originally Posted by I_royalty_I View Post
    How long is it? I'm very good at bullshitting essays and making them sound nice.
    But I'm pretty tired and would zone out on a 10 page paper haha
    Basically 3 pages

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    Can try, unless you'd like the femme touch on your papers.

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    I'm in 10th grade but I haven't read that yet :/

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    Ok I private messaged you.
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    Thanks guys, PMed you all!
    @(you need an account to see links) I dunno, might just be part of the Canadian curriculum �\_(ツ)_/�

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    I guess. What level of English are you in? In America (or at least the part where I am) there's CP, accelerated and AP. And all the books their reading are different

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    Quote Originally Posted by Andymac106 View Post
    I guess. What level of English are you in? In America (or at least the part where I am) there's CP, accelerated and AP. And all the books their reading are different
    Oh hmm, never heard of CP/Accelerated, but I think that's the equivalent of Applied/Academic (respectively). ^^ What part of America are you in?

    For us it's in this order of difficulty: Locally Developed -> Applied -> Academic -> Pre-AP (until grade 11 and 12, which are actual AP courses, nonetheless Pre-AP doesn't differ too much from Academic save for the extra workload and content from the grade above).
    For Academic (my level), we studied Othello and Catcher in the Rye ~

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