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    Last edited by Mint; 12-08-2013 at 11:28 AM. Reason: ty jad love U longttime

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    awww you moon child you.

    try commas, i see what your doing with your formatting like pauses, and such. in poetry i believe commas to be used as a breathe.

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    *wipes tear*

    Biuriful.




    Reminds me of an SNES game I once played as a youngster.
    (+1 if you can guess it - but it's not a well-known title.)

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    @Mint, this is really well written. Have you ever thought about submitting some of your writing into poetry contests? I used to do quite a bit of it myself years ago. http://www.poetry.com There was also a chance at having your poetry put into a book.
    Last edited by kiyomi; 12-20-2013 at 10:10 PM.

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    So pretty!

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    I really like this @Mint

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    I feel really bad that I missed when this was posted. I love it Mint. Seriously, dat talent.

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