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    Battle of the Elements

    Tried a new style of meter and rhyming scheme. Definitely not my best work, but it was a fun challenge and a good story none the less.
    All of the water left in the world
    Could not quell the fire's wrath
    The rain flooded the earth
    To plead with the fire
    Who burned within the bath

    Air in its dignified noble way
    Joined with the water too
    And with their combined force
    Created a storm
    But still the fire burned true

    The earth beneath the watery depths
    Shook fast within the wake
    Unpleased with the chaos
    Earth opened its jaws
    And drank up all of the lake

    Air, all alone, now trembled with fear
    As fire smiled with delight
    In the blink of an eye
    Fire grew and reached out
    Consuming air with might

    With the battle won fire grew stronger
    And felt reignited
    Fire began to warm earth
    Fearing its feelings
    Were unrequited

    Wind blew from the aftermath of air
    And fire began to die
    Sensing this earth reached high
    Enclosing the fire 'round
    And keeping fire alive

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    I'm not usually one for poetry, but all of yours is always so amazing.

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    Pieces of writing on cK are always fun to read for some reason. They put me into super introspective mode for a few minutes. Nice writing, Tim.

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    Quote Originally Posted by grrrawr View Post
    I'm not usually one for poetry, but all of yours is always so amazing.
    Quote Originally Posted by Raj View Post
    Pieces of writing on cK are always fun to read for some reason. They put me into super introspective mode for a few minutes. Nice writing, Tim.
    Thanks guys. I appreciate it. And yeah Raj, introspective mode can be super fun.

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