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    Review my Introduction to Essay?

    In 8th grade, need to right an introduction for LA.:
    Topic: Set a goal, and what you do to achieve goal
    Introduction: Get into Harvard

    I glanced at the envelope with nothing but pure amazement. I, the underdog, had received a response from one of the most prestigious universities in the world, Harvard. I slowly raised the envelope and started to tear away the seal. I beheld the letter and gasped, in plain twelve-point font, it was printed that I had been accepted. Getting accepted to Harvard would mean the world to me, but the only way I could get accepted to Harvard would be to stay healthy, get great grades, and do many challenging extracurricular activities.

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    Last edited by Flame; 01-15-2013 at 06:29 PM.

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