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Glad to be of help. I hope you don't mind if I do this in chunks. My eyes start going @_@ after a while, just from the strike and color tags, and I also begin to lose attention after a couple paragraphs.
Also, in my first edit post, I overlooked making "noted in related legislation, it is within a properly" red, in the second paragraph. In case you didn't see it too, in revising your draft.
*Consider using a hyphen in all instances of "open-carry", open-carriers, and "openly-carried", to clarify that they mean what you mean. I'm just going to start highlighting them in red and you can fix them if you want, since it's faster than me having to write the tags in. (Look over the first few paragraphs I did too, as I didn't think of it previously)
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