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    Candy WIP



    Yeah, I was going to continue to work on it in private but I figured this section needs more activity.

    Give me ideas on what to improve on so far, while there is tons of things(lighting, flow, colouring, ect), name some for me.

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    I like the render. At first I thought the green on the right clashed, but I think it goes well with the clover on the girl's right cheek. I feel like the background could be more developed, smudged and blended more maybe? It just seems like the colors are too separate. Also, the piece is too 2-d. If you could add some depth, it would be 10x better. It does have nice, noticeable lighting on the girl's face which I like. The flow is more subtle, but I can still see it.

    All in all, it's a good WIP.

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